My surging tears , made an ocean deep
Life in flood, whether awake or asleep
✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
What’s your lifespan, I asked marigold
It ends before starting, if plucked and sold
🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻
Life gives many occasions to celebrate
But to live is the biggest of all ,we forget
🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
The land of my heart is so arid and infertile
They kept throwing seeds of love, just to pile
Embrace Life 
This is both beautiful and sorrowful. The lines about the marigold really made me stop and think. The imagery was striking. Just a wonderful piece of writing, Reena. 🙂
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So glad you enjoyed , Mike
Thank you for supporting me ❣️😊
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So beautiful and thought provoking . Truly enjoyed.💕
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Thank you so much my dear friend 💕💕
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My pleasure.💕
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Liked the first three lines the most. Short and amazing poem.
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Thank you so much RJ ,for liking ,
And commenting💕😊
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It was my pleasure 😄
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I think this is the best I’ve seen till till now. You’re amazing!
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“But to live is the biggest of all, we forget” This line resonates deeply with me. I think it is so true that we so forget about actually living, being the truest, authentic being possible, to experience aliveness in all of its forms – the sadness the happiness, all of it, as we are consumed with illusions of the mind. A beautiful poem, Reena. ❤️❤️
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I always love your thoughts and reflections on life, lot of simplicity and calmness in what you write
Thank you so much for your precious comments💕❣️
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That’s so kind, thank you so much, Reena. You’re most welcome. Is my pleasure to read you. ❤️💕
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Good life quotes, Reena. Both beautiful and thoughtful 👌💐💖
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Thank you sir , I am elated to read such kind words😊😊
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Oh wow, the last two lines! Just to pile (and not to get planted 🙁)
Very profound. Wonderfully penned poem, Mam! 👌
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So nice to see you ,dear
Thank you so much 👌❣️😊
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Everyone can have take for life from “Life gives many occasions to celebrate”. Nice composition.
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Thank you so much 🌷❣️❣️
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The shortness of your thoughts sweetened the piece even more…
🇯🇲🏖️
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I am elated, lived your sweet words❤️
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Thank you, Reena, for liking my comment on Kaushal’s post!
Joanna
PS Please look up my post on 24 December!
Joanna
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My pleasure
Yes definitely I will be there.❤️❤️
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