Unfurl the sails of your vessels of thoughts and imaginations, that’s one thing we have to help ourselves with, why blame the wind or the one who is blowing it(The Lord).
In the lake of my mind there is a wave,
It rises, it falls, sometimes even resonate,
The wave is a sign of my free spirit,
It's existence assures me lake of my mind never stagnate,
the little boats of my imaginations,
how wonderfully do they all float,
vessels of good thoughts with its sail unfurled,
catching the wind, how smoothly remain afloat,
Wind of intellect, without ceasing would blow,
into a lovely piece of creation,
The wave rise and fall and propagate,
Even when damp never fail to leave an impression.

Always seeking your blessings and best wishes🌹🌹🌹🌷🌷🌷
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That’s a lovely metaphor. I loved it. Great job!
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Thank you Shweta, really glad you liked my poetry, 🌸🌸💕
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Your lake of thoughts
Floating on the boats
Like rising and falling waves
Your imagination flows
Along the breezy winds
Your mind of blowing bubbles
Touching the lovely pebbles
Creating plenty pleasantness
Your poem is simply superb Reena, loved it. 🤗🥰❤
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What a lovely piece , you are a creator,
to my poem , it provides an accelerator
So much thanks for such a beautiful comment, my friend🌷🌹🌹❤️
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My sweet pleasure dear 🤗❤
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Creation is superb indeed, Suma!👏
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Thank you Sir 😊 🙏
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Superb poem, Reenaji ! Your site title ‘Embrace life’has a beautiful concept
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Thank you so much sir, for your inspiring words😊
I am just a month old blogger here at wp. But my experience had been great, I got to know such wonderful people, and their amazing pieces of art.
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Mind is not stagnant, and it shouldn’t be. I like your vibrant mind and its creative pieces. This is one piece.
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Such nice words , I am happy and feeling motivated , thankyou so much sir🌼🌼🌼🌼🤗
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That so a beautiful wish for every one of us. Well written!
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Thank you so much🌺🌺
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Wonderful and creative piece. Truly enjoyed.
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That’s so nice , I am happy you enjoyed 💕
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I did indeed. My pleasure.💕
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Beautiful
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Thank you 💐
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What a creative mind !!! Totally impressed . 😳😍
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Thank you so much💕💕😊
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Nicely composed
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Thank you😊😊
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Creatively expressed. Beautiful!!💫
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Thank you so much♥️💕💕
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Love this❤
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Thank you💕❣️
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This is so beautiful, Reena. I love how you compare the business of the mind to, for me, being alive. I think there is often a focus on controlling the mind, and yet when we watch the mind, and are grateful for the thoughts that arise, as those are given to us too, detachment and surrender become more present; and, in this space the mind slows of its own accord. Beautiful poem. 💖
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Such lovely thoughts shared by you , I really love to read them as they fill me with enormous positivity, thank you so much ,Jeff❤️👌😊💕
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I’m so glad this is so; gives me deep joy knowing this. Is my pleasure to be here, and to read you, Reena. I’m so happy we connected. 💖☺️✨🌹
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Mind Is carried away like this. Lovely metaphor☺️
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Thank you so much,Jane❤️❤️
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My pleasure dear Reena ❤️
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Lovely poem, Reena.
It’s beautiful, every line is beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Maria , my friend ❤️❤️
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Extremely skilfully crafted, mam, as always. You always have an aesthetic way of creating beautiful ripples in the lake of your mind 😉
Brilliant metaphor; so well penned!
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Thank you so much ,dear Sam ❤️❤️
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