To the boundaries and bondages ,
I affirm and confirm “ A NO “
As,,,,,..,,
I wish to flow,
freely ,
defying ,
all directions and dimensions,
the waves of worldly tensions,
the volley of unasked questions,
for my denials , my approvals,
are mine ,
my choice ,my rejections
only are mine,
gathering momentum,
untethered,
longing to flow,,,,,,
This is a powerful declaration of selfhood — a vivid, unapologetic reclaiming of autonomy. The way you begin with “To the boundaries and bondages, I affirm and confirm ‘A NO’” feels like a manifesto, not just a statement. It’s bold and direct, turning denial into an act of affirmation.
The imagery of flowing freely, defying directions and dimensions, carries a beautiful sense of motion and release — as if you’re not just refusing constraints, but actively choosing the formlessness of your own being. The contrast between “the waves of worldly tensions” and your inner resolve emphasizes strength amid pressure.
What stays with me most is the ownership in these lines: “my denials, my approvals, are mine / my choice, my rejections only are mine.” There’s a potent clarity here, an insistence that your voice and your will belong to you alone. The repetition of “mine” anchors the poem in self-possession.
The closing — “gathering momentum, untethered, longing to flow” — leaves the reader with a sense of forward motion, of energy still building, yet already free. It’s not an ending, but a continuing. A stirring and courageous piece.
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I m super elated to have a response as this in my post
Thank you so much for an elaborate description of every word I wrote
That’s really so close to my thinking process
Just the way I was musing over🙏🙏
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