When pain soothes the soul ,
it becomes,
a comforting desire,
the ambiguities seep in,
eclipsing the entirety,
subduing meek desire,
my diffused feelings,
recklessly converge
burning with thousand fires,,,,,
Comforting desire!!!
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When pain soothes the soul ,
it becomes,
a comforting desire,
the ambiguities seep in,
eclipsing the entirety,
subduing meek desire,
my diffused feelings,
recklessly converge
burning with thousand fires,,,,,
Embrace Life 
Dear Reena Bisht ji,
Your poem flows like an inner whisper
gentle yet scorching, fragile yet fierce.
The way you turn pain into a soothing companion,
a longing almost sacred,
is profoundly moving.
The imagery of ambiguities eclipsing everything…
the quiet surrender of meek desires…
and then those scattered feelings
converging into a thousand burning fires
this is not merely poetry,
it is the anatomy of a soul in transformation.
Your words hold the rare alchemy
where suffering does not wound
it awakens,
it refines,
it reveals.
Thank you for giving your readers
a passage into that delicate intersection
where agony becomes art,
and silence becomes flame.
Beautifully penned.
Your lines linger long after they’re read.
—Vijay
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Your insight is perfectly in tune with my poetry
Your words are precious and inspiring
Feel blessed to have your guidance and support always
Thank you for reading 😊🙏
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