A song

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1. Reena ji, 🙏

   Your lines are like the gentle breath of a tender heart,
   flowing into words until they become a song of their own.
   In this creation, love is not merely an emotion,
   but a profound sadhana,
   one that touches the unfathomable depths of the ocean
   and longs to reach the silent consent of the horizon.

   While reading your poem, it feels
   as though some emotions remain unspoken,
   yet the heart understands them all.
   This language of silence itself
   is the greatest accomplishment of your poetry. 🙏

   In the same rhythm of your feeling,
   a few lines effortlessly descended from the heart

   And beyond that very horizon,
   where silence itself becomes the answer,
   the heart, draped in its waiting,
   continues to transform love into acceptance.

   Your poem seems to whisper this truth
   that when love becomes a song,
   the answer is found not in words,
   but in pure experience.
   -Vijay Srivastava

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   1. Thank you so much for such deep understanding of my simple poetry
      Truly elated the way you beautifully elaborate the essence of thought’s reflected here 🙏🙏

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