My life , My right

My life is my domain, they may ,
blur my focus but never my goal,
may dampen my mind waves,
but could never perturb my soul,

may lessen the ebullience in me ,
could never fluster my existence,
my life is , I assert , my right ,
not merely a bodily subsistence,

It’s not about how they think ,
it’s matter of my acceptance,
it’s not what they desire,
it’s the reflection of my expectance,,,,

4 thoughts on “My life , My right

  1. The assertion of personal sovereignty and the resilience of the soul against external dampening is beautifully captured. “My life is my domain” is a fantastic, inspiring and superbbbbbbb line❤❤❤❤❤

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  2. Reena ji,🙏🌹
    Your poem speaks in the quiet language of self-respect and inner resolve,
    vision may be blurred,
    yet the flame of purpose remains untouched.
    There is calm strength in your words,
    a steadiness that no external force can unsettle.
    This is not a claim of existence,
    but a serene affirmation of self-acceptance.
    Reading it brings both stillness and reassurance,
    awakening a deep sense of inner faith.
    A beautiful, powerful, and inspiring expression.
    -Vijay Srivastava

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