I am an ocean of surging thoughts,
But the “me” in me, remained dormant,
I am a handful of dust, full of potential,
But the clay in “me”, lacked the spark,
I am a petal of flower, that blossomed,
But the scent in “me” failed to fragnate ,
I am the princess of the kingdom of my heart
But the me in “me” , failed to win a single heart,
The “I” and “me”, failed to fall in concurrence,
Neither of the two could soar up, with their wings .
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That’s so natural. The dual personality well depicted. 👌👌👍💐
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Yes sir. Thank you so much ♥️💕💕
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Loved this piece, my friend. So much meaning in each line. Wonderful.💕❤️💕
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Thank you so much my friend , always glad to read your lovely and inspiring thoughts♥️💕💕
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Always a pleasure.💕❤️💕
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It’s different. Nice one.
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Thank you😊
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That was so deep and insightful. Loved it💕
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Thank you so much dear friend 💕💕
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What a deeply reflective and poignant poem. The repeated contrast between immense potential and unrealized fulfillment creates a powerful emotional resonance. Lines such as “I am an ocean of surging thoughts, but the ‘me’ in me remained dormant” beautifully capture the inner conflict many people experience between who they are and who they long to become
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