Every drop of rain,marks,
It’s presence in my life ,
the flowers evince me with
their resplendence,
the vast sky above ascertain,
to protect me,
how they💦 familiar to me,
filled with affinity ,
rolling down my cheeks,
with allegiance, assure me,
an unconditional togetherness ,
how gratified I feel to reveal,
your unfailing attention is now ,
my ipseity.
Reena Ji , your poem feels like a soft conversation between the soul and the universe.
The way you weave rain, sky, and tears into a language of belonging is deeply touching. Each image carries both vulnerability and strength as if nature itself is whispering reassurance to your heart.
“Unconditional togetherness” and “my ipseity” beautifully capture that rare moment when gratitude turns into self-realization. Your words don’t merely express emotion; they create a sanctuary of feeling.
Truly soulful and exquisitely written.
-Vijay
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Thank you so much sir 🌸🌸
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